How to: PARASGenerally, the biggest difference between paras and para samples is that paras are done with other roleplayers while samples are used solely in auditions. However, there is one type of para, to be explained, that is not an interaction. Paras. The point of a para is to move the plot forward. Two or more characters write together, reblogging the prior person’s post and adding their own character’s actions and thoughts. Paras range in any kind, from first meetings to friendships, enemies, even lovers. Usually a para will be at least 2 paragraphs and the most important thing to remember is to be fair to your partner and give them something to respond to. If they write a para that is 4 paragraphs and you respond with half of that it can be pretty frustrating. Dos and Donts:
Steps to Para Writing
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Words, Words, Words | Instead of Angry1. Acrid: extremely harsh (also refers to an unpleasant taste or smell) |
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Words, Words, Words | Instead of Said
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Love is in the Air | Kissing Scenes
Okay, first, remember that a kiss is much, much more than just lips. It is lips, but also tongues, teeth, eyes, faces, hands, noses, bodies, heartbeats, breath, voice- and most importantly, a kiss is emotions. A kiss without emotion is just wet mushy lips stuck together. Ew. Gross. The most important part of a kiss isn’t the how, but the who- because of the emotions between the two people. Okay so:
Wow, that was a lot! Gosh I hope it wasn’t too much! Keep in mind not every kiss has all these things- this is just a list of things to consider when writing a kiss, and based on how long of a kiss you want to make. Keep in mind that typing “they kissed for a long time”…that’s six words, it takes half a second to read, so that’s a short kiss! If you want a long kiss, you need long sentences that make the reader linger.
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How do you portray someone with low self-esteemWhat many people seem to forget- or not even realise- is that normally, if someone has extremely low self esteem, they are more likely to sleep around. After looking into it, my first thoughts are that it’s actually quite hard to believe that, if someone has low self-esteem, they would want to show themselves off, naked, and be more sexually active. Then, if you look at it from different perspectives, it makes perfect sense. To make you feel better about yourself, you want people to compliment you, to make it seem like they love you. Different lovers and partners and other people who can make you feel good about yourself. So my first pointer (after a lot of rambling) would be to make them a little bit flirty. Wanting to have sex. Not for the actual sex, just because there’s a small possibility that they may feel better about themselves. Another pointer, would be to make them cautious. Make them look around at their surroundings differently- think about what they’d do if they looked at themselves in the mirror- really dig deep into your character and how they feel. Possibly write out some of their thoughts, how they move, how they believe the world sees them. Another way to do this would be to write different drabbles… just short pieces of writing that help you delve into the character’s mindset. How they feel about their body, picking out nitty gritty imperfections that may affect how they act. Once, I portrayed a character with body dysmorphia. A male character, and everywhere he went, he would be so self-absorbed, articulately making sure his hair looked okay, making sure he just looked okay-ish. Maybe, another way of looking at self-esteem would be to make them seem extremely selfish. Isolated from the main cliques, almost reclusive and shy. Shyness is always a way to play key characters out but, unless it’s executed well, it looks shabby and misleading. Whenever the character is complimented, make them quickly shrug it off, change the subject. Or make them blush. If you want it to be a secret- they don’t want anyone to know how shy or bad they feel about their looks & personality, then think of things that could quickly change the conversation’s wavelength. If it’s not so secret, then just have them reply like “Oh, I don’t know… you on the other hand…” as that still shows the conversation change, but also a backhanded compliment toward the other character. In short, there are several ways to portray a character with low self-esteem, I hope this give you an overall understanding |
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Words, Words, Words | Instead of WhisperedInstead of whispered, consider:
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Words, Words, Words | Facial Expressions1. Absent: preoccupied |
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Words, Words, Words | Instead of WalkInstead of walk, consider:
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